There were some points of clear insight in this essay, and you’ve made some strong improvement in the structure of your essays, where you organise the information into paragraphs and keep to one idea for each one.
To develop your work further:
- Provide a much wider range of quotations to support every point you make
- Examine the way the language is used as well as the meaning of the words (for example, in poetry, how do the words sound – or in the play, is there a metaphor or simile used?
- Ensure you understand the broader meaning of the texts you’re referring to – For example, Katharina was bullied and ridiculed by Petruchio until she gave in!
React!